Week #3 100 Word Challenge

I was in my house when I saw a flash of light. Suddenly I was in the middle of the forest.Thats when I saw it! I didn't know what it was but it seemed to be going backwards.I wanted to run but instead froze. It was coming really close. It seemed like a big animal.Then I heard a sound more like its
voice. It was singing! I asked "what are you". The thing answered back " i am your imagination". I saw a light again and i was back in my room.


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  1. HillcrestBlog3October 3, 2018 at 1:34 PM

    Hello Cutehamster,
    This is an interesting use of the prompt. Remember that the focus of today's lesson was to avoid repeating words in such a short piece of writing e.g. seemed, light, and it. Also, always put a space after a period. Keep on writing and learning.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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